Sunday, March 14, 2010

Blue Sky Love

Blue sky love, new and fresh,
Never separated, ever joined,
You think to yourself, let our love be strong,
Never passing, ever pressing,
Blue sky, be everlasting,

White day, joy day, musical happiness, light laugh day,
Spinning dancers in pure cloud dresses,
Clean black leading, holding, caring,
Let our love be strong,
Everlasting blue sky,
Never rendered severed, ever tender,
Live you’re to this, 1+1=1,

Long are those romance moments gone,
Blown away are days like chilling fall leaves,
Winter and snow, bitter cold,
Fake love, dressed in smudged costumes,
Placed in the store front, put on their faces,
They don’t know the meaning and action of love,
Old and haggard, broken down,
Worn thin, outside worldly hides,
Our love is different from their biting cold blizzard,
These things press us, but do not affect us,
Blue sky love, old and used,
Never separated, ever joined,
You think to yourself, our love is still strong,
Never passing, ever pressing,
Blue sky, be everlasting.

2 comments:

  1. I enjoy that you bring out the "real love" and the "fake love," showing both and the differences between them, instead of just expounding upon one kind of love throughout the whole poem.

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  2. this is brilliant poetry ...keep this up. write a whole book of them. i think you've found one of your "knacks" :)

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